Thursday, November 14, 2013

Commentary: We the People

  Love doesn't see race, color, gender, or sex. So why should we discriminate against it? Same sex marriage shouldn't be considered a crime against humanity and should be treated with as much respect and tolerance as any other married couple.

   I support the author, mguerrero22.blogsopt.com, argument that same sex marriage should be allowed and recognized. She makes a good valid argument that it is an infringement on civil rights and that people shouldn't be so hasty as to just completely eliminate it and not be so open minded as to letting it happen.

     She has done a great job stating her personal opinion and explain why she believes it should happen. She could've, though, have gone further and elaborated more with the subject matter. For instance, giving previous history examples like how everyone was against African American civil rights or women suffrage. It is as old and outdated as floppy disks and walk-mans.

    Overall I enjoyed the authors post and stand by it 100% of the way. She has taken a very highly debated and controversial topic and broke it down to where it was short, sweet, and to the point. As I had previously stated, some examples or even some evidence as to why those states adopted the law and not others would've been great

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